I am a writer, reader and editor of science fiction and fantasy (and sub-genres thereof) and can assist authors from the very first draft and up to (but not including) copyediting. I hold a BA (Hons) in English Literature and I am an entry level member of the Society for Editors and Proofreaders. I have been assisting authors with their manuscripts since June 2014 (prior to which I worked as an intern for an overseas (American) independent publisher for one year).
Requesting a sample does not obligate you to hire me. In fact, I believe it is in your interest to sample a selection of editors. It is so, so important to find the right editor for your manuscript. In addition to assessing editing skills and technical knowledge, you should feel comfortable engaging with your editor. You should have a clear understanding of what your chosen editing package will entail, the monies due and the date of expected return. Most of all, you should feel in control of your manuscript’s development at all times.
I offer a five-page sample, but like to see the first chapter (two if they are short). Providing a sample for a developmental edit is problematic in that most of the ‘magic’ and ‘discovery’ occurs during the second reading, with the full story in mind. Reading one or two chapters enables me to get a ‘feel’ for the opening scenes and theme of your book, from which I am able to offer an example of how I use Word’s Tracked changes and comment system to make observations, suggestions and ask questions.
Further information: Assessing a Freelance Editor (blog post)
The developmental editing service includes detailed feedback on:
- Dialogue versus narration
- Point of view
- Showing versus telling
- Orientation and engagement with the story
Line editing is similar to developmental editing in that I will examine the same elements, but with a focus on tightening the presentation of your writing including:
- Removing repetitive and redundant words such as: just, all, had, was, that etc
- Ensuring dialogue ‘sounds’ realistic
- Correcting confusing sentences and paragraphs
- Examining word choice
- Correcting confusing pov and tense switches
Copy editing will check your manuscript for language, grammar, and spelling. It is assumed your manuscript has been through both a developmental and line edit as there is minimal interference with the written word at this stage.
I do not copy edit myself, but for manuscripts I have worked on, I have negotiated special rates with two copy editors I trust:
I am of the opinion that if I have been involved in the latter stages of editing, that an alternate set of eyes should proofread the manuscript.
Raymond Clarke is a published independent author and one of a handful of proofreaders I would trust with my own manuscript. He will examine your manuscript for grammar, spelling, punctuation, word order and similar problems. His testimonials can be found here.
If you have a story in mind, but no time to write it, or would prefer not to, then ghostwriting may be the appropiate option. I do not engage in ghostwriting myself, but can recommend:
Formatting for print and e-book
If you require low-cost assistance with formatting for print or e-book then I would recommend Raymond Clarke.